Exercise for a Storyteller #6: Use a Picture Prompt

When I was reading Humphrey Carpenter’s biography of J.R.R. Tolkien, I was astonished to learn the extent of Tolkien’s artistic side. He loved drawing from the time he was a young boy and continued to develop the craft into his adulthood, illustrating his own pictures for The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings. Not only did he enjoy creating art, but he was also greatly inspired by it.  

Among Tolkien’s possessions was a carefully preserved postcard reproduction of Josef Madlener’s Der Berggeist (translated as The Mountain Spirit), which shows an old man with a white beard and wide-brimmed hat sitting on a rock in the wooded mountains. On the cover in which he kept it was written, “Origin of Gandalf.”

Of course, Gandalf is not simply the man in the picture. He is Gandalf the Grey. He is the leader of the Fellowship of the Ring. He is Mithrandir. He is the Balrog Conqueror. He is the White Rider. He is the embodiment of Goodness, Beauty, and Truth—a hero from time immemorial.

No one but Tolkien could have looked at Der Berggeist and imagined all that. Nevertheless, we have to wonder: Would Tolkien have created Gandalf the way he did without that picture?

Probably not.

And so the old adage, “A picture is worth a thousand words,” may actually come up short with Tolkien. (The combined word count of The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings is close to 700,000, and Gandalf is one of the most central characters in those tales.)

In a similar fashion, I frequently use pictures as story prompts with my students. There are many great resources like The Mysteries of Harris Burdick by Chris Van Allsburg, which are specially designed as story prompts, but beautiful works of art can be used just as easily. I tend to choose ones that go along with something my class reads in History, Literature, or Religion.

When we read about the fire in Rome, I project this painting:

When we read Little Red Riding Hood, I project this painting:

When we imagine what Christ’s hidden life was like, I project this painting:

In every case, I have students look at the painting on their own for a period of time. Then, I guide a discussion on their observations. We consider the artistic elements of the painting, focusing on things like form, color, contrast, tone, light source, focal points, and small details.

Once we have seen the painting, then we consider its story elements. I ask the students what the artist may have been trying to say to us, the viewers. Inevitably, they have many different ideas, each colored by their own personal response to the picture.

Finally, students are ready to write their own stories, following the one scene in one sitting rule. What they come up with tends to be quite different from one student to the next, but the trace of the original picture remains in some form, although drawn anew with fresh lines.

One striking aspect of this kind of storytelling exercise is that it compels students to think in terms of visual imagery. Because they are immersed in the picture, they make an extra effort to draw it in their words.

And who’s to say how many words a picture will be worth to the aspiring storyteller?

I ran into a former student recently. No longer a pre-teen, she was headed to college and brimming with enthusiasm. She told me that she was still writing a story based on one of the pictures we had used as a prompt in seventh grade. That was one of the best things I’ve ever heard from a student.

To think that one picture stirred all that storytelling!

First Image Credit: Der Berggeist by Josef Madlener, c. 1925-2930

Second Image Credit: Nero’s Torches by Henry Siemiradzki, 1882

Third Image Credit: Little Red Riding Hood by Jessie Willcox Smith, 1911

Fourth Image Credit: Shadow of Death by William Holman Hunt, 1873

Exercise for a Storyteller #3: Interview the Main Character

So far in this series of storytelling exercises, we’ve focused on ways to develop compelling plots. Now it’s time to think about the characters themselves. After all, even the most fascinating plot will fall flat if its characters are dull and one-dimensional.

To begin, let’s consider what character development means. We’ll keep it simple and say that it’s the craft through which a writer makes a character come to life. The better the character development, the easier it is for a reader to know a character inside and out. That means being able to picture what a character looks like and being able to imagine what he’s thinking at any given moment in a story. In other words, the character is more than his looks or his role in the story. He is the total sum of his words and actions, hopes and fears, and virtues and vices.

Many writers let those things develop organically in the course of writing a story, meaning they “discover” who their characters are as the story unfolds. The problem for a child, though, is that process requires a fair amount of revision, not to mention a serious time commitment.

To help my students really know their characters from the start, I like having them “interview” their main characters before writing a story. For example, when we finish reading Beowulf, students often write their own spin-offs. But first, I have them interview their main character. Many of them choose to interview Beowulf or one of the other minor heroes like Hrothgar or Wiglaf, but others choose Grendel or Grendel’s Mother or the Fire Dragon. Some even choose lesser characters like Unferth or Brecca or Aeschere.

I usually give my students a few standard questions and have them write the interview out in a formal fashion in their journals. They may answer the questions based on what the character seems like in the original story, or they may imagine the character in a new light. Here is a list of sample questions I like to use.

State your full name and age.

Tell me about your family.

What are your hobbies?

What is your biggest hope?

What is your biggest secret?

What is your biggest fear?

What is your best virtue?

What is your worst vice?

The list of questions could go on and on, but a short sample is plenty to get a child started. Then, I ask my students to come up with a few original questions, which allows them to expand on a side of the character they really want to develop.

The results of this are highly entertaining, and we spend ample time sharing our interviews with each other. I once had a student interview Grendel’s Mother and find out that she had a soft spot for “Baby Mine” from Dumbo. (The Grendel family descends from Cain and hates music, which made this twist very intriguing.) Another time, a student “discovered” that Hrothgar slept with a nightlight. (He is the king whom Beowulf saves from Grendel and Grendel’s Mother.) And who knew that Wiglaf’s greatest treasure was a fingernail clipping from the arm Beowulf tore off Grendel in their death match? (That was a comical, yet fitting treasure for a warrior who revered Beowulf as the greatest of all warriors.)

In true journalistic form, my students imagine they are getting the scoop on characters, and they are in a sense. All the while, they are learning to develop strong, believable characters for their stories. Whether they are working from an existing story or writing a completely original one, interviewing main characters is a great way to get started. As the character takes shape, the storyline itself will come alive more fully.

Image Credit: Illustration in Stories of Beowulf by H. E. Marshall. New York: E. P. Dutton & Company, 1908.

The First Habit of a Storyteller: Fill-up on the Cauldron

In his essay, “On Fairy Stories,” J.R.R. Tolkien likens the collection of stories told throughout history to a soup, all simmering together in a huge pot. He says that “the Pot of Soup, the Cauldron of Story, has always been boiling, and to it have continually been added new bits, dainty and undainty.” This metaphor explains in part why there are so many versions of different fairy tales, such as Little Red Riding Hood or Cinderella. Each of the different storytellers, as Tolkien’s line of thinking goes, sampled the soup and added to it. That’s why Red’s granny sometimes dies, and Cindy’s step-sisters sometimes live.

I would like to use this metaphor for the first habit needed to become a good storyteller. Simply put, one needs to fill-up on the cauldron and taste as many stories as possible. Let’s see how this lines up with our two premier storytellers: C.S. Lewis and J.R.R. Tolkien.

When I read Lewis’s Letters to Children, I eagerly underlined every book recommendation he made and soon realized I would never be able to get through them all—and those were just the ones he put down for kids! I had the same daunting realization when I read his fuller collection of letters, most of which were addressed to his brother, father, and scholarly peers, never mind culling through all the citations in his essays. Perhaps the most telling source of information on Lewis’s reading is Surprised by Joy. There he references countless stories that shaped his early life. Taken as a whole and much simplified, I think of his reading as fitting into the following categories: epics, narrative poetry, myths (especially Norse ones), romances (think Jane Austen), fairy tales, legends, fables, and Bible stories (though approached later in life).

Clearly, Lewis consumed the “cauldron of story” so fully that he was able to draw from it (however intentionally or unintentionally we will never know) in his own storytelling. Consider, for a moment, The Chronicles of Narnia. Aslan, a talking lion, is a direct representation of Christ (the Lion of Judah), yet he would fit just as easily into any one of Aesop’s fables. His great villain, Jadis (aka the White Witch), could stand up to the wickedest witch any fairy tale could dish up. What’s more, her physical characteristics line up very closely with Hans Christian Anderson’s Snow Queen. Then there are the children in his stories, all of whom have been disenfranchised in some way, much like many a famous child in the world of faerie (Hansel and Gretel, to name just two). Of course, there are overlaps with mythology as well, as seen through his many fauns and centaurs and talking animals. It’s no wonder that Lewis was a master storyteller. He hadn’t just filled up on the soup; he stuffed himself full of it over and over again.

Likewise, Tolkien had a voracious appetite for the “cauldron of story.” In the aforementioned essay, he indicates a preference for the taste of “faerie” above all else. But by his own account, that was not a dominant taste in his early life and only awakened as he got older. Nevertheless, the number of fairy tales he mentions in his essay is great. He gives the impression of having read all twelve of Andrew Lang’s fairy book collections, in addition to a good many more by the Brothers Grimm and innumerable others. He also makes casual references to countless myths and fables before closing out his essay with nuanced connections between the world of “faerie” and the Bible. He had eaten so much of the “soup” that it was oozing out of him not only in his essay, but in all his stories as well.

For example, Tolkien uses countless elements commonly found in these core materials in The Lord of the Rings, though with such a distinct flavor of his own that his recipe is wholly original. His elves are certainly not of the shoemaker type, and his dwarfs would hardly encase a dead maiden in a glass coffin (unless she had a precious stone inside of her). Tolkien’s hobbits and orcs feel altogether unique, even if one senses that some flavor, long forgotten, was conjured from the pot in their creation. Then there are human characters like Aragorn whose heroism has vague echoes of the likes of Beowulf and King Arthur but with a style all his own. There is no doubt that Tolkien filled up on the “cauldron of story” over and over again, and ultimately added many of his own “dainty bits” to it.

From Lewis and Tolkien we learn that filling up on the “cauldron of story” is an irreplaceable habit for becoming a good storyteller. Make plenty of room for epics, narrative poetry, the Bible, legends, myths, fairy tales, and fables as they provide the stock of most stories. If you eat enough of it, your own pot will soon begin to simmer.

First Image Credit: Boy Eating Soup (Enfant mangeant sa soupe), by Francois Bonvin (1861)

Second Image Credit: Soup, by William-Adolphe Bouguereau (1865)

The Habits of a Storyteller

Classical educators commonly hold up “the story” as its principal teaching tool. If you want to lead a student to learn Wisdom and Virtue, then read a great story together. The lessons in them are manifold, and their ability to catch even the most dispassionate student is well known. Similarly, if you want a student to demonstrate Wisdom and Virtue, then have him write a story.

Monsters or dragons? Hunstmen or knights? Damsels or shieldmaidens? The shape of a student’s story reveals far more than his likes or dislikes within a particular genre. It reveals the very drama of his imagination, which is the playground of the soul.

Yet, teachers often find it easier to help a student receive a story than to write one. Even the most gifted need a lot of help thinking about the sound and structure of a story, let alone developing an interesting plot. Classical educators have a few strategies that greatly aid in this area.

The first and, perhaps, most important strategy comes from the tradition of imitatio, which means “imitation” in Latin. Classical educators hold that imitation is the chief mode of learning. If you want to become good at something, then find a model of that something to replicate. It follows, then, that a student who wants to write a good story should find a good story to imitate. Better still, find a good storyteller, and imitate his or her habits.

Two of the best and most commonly read among my students are C.S. Lewis and J.R.R. Tolkien, so I recently dove into their writings to see what they had to say about telling stories. With any luck, they would have some kind of “recipe” or “formula” all laid out for aspiring storytellers. Although that did not turn out to be the case, they had many tidbits of advice and lots of habits in common in their approach to storytelling, namely: reading, playing, and drawing.

In the next three posts, I will explain the importance of these habits for aspiring storytellers, be they in the classroom or at home, and show how Lewis and Tolkien both made use of them. Here are the names of the posts and brief summaries.

Fill-up on the Cauldron (aka Read): In this post, I rely on Tolkien’s image of the “cauldron of story” to show the importance of reading and listening to great stories in the formation of a storyteller.

Boxen the Story (aka Play): In this post, I focus on Lewis’s imaginary play world of Boxen as a metaphor for the role of play in forming the imagination of a storyteller.

Start with a Picture (aka Draw): In this post, I bring together examples of how Lewis and Tolkien both used pictures to inform their writing.

Once this series is through, the next one will apply these habits to the classroom, and I will share some of the exercises that have been the most fruitful and enjoyable for my students.

I do want to offer two disclaimers. First, I am an amateur on Lewis and much more so on Tolkien. Though an immense fan of both, I have hardly tapped the well of their writings. Second, while Lewis and Tolkien possessed the habits I am highlighting, I am in no way saying they followed them as a rule or regimen. It is the teacher in me that likes to synthesize and organize and has therefore extrapolated something concrete for children and their families. But the writer in me also knows that habits, like good stories, form little by little and rarely in the order we intend. Creation, which is at the heart of telling stories, is an open door that one can walk through however one pleases.

Image Credit: The Story Book by William-Adolphe Bouguereau (1877)